Broken Souls

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You were my forever fire that seems to be burning down. We were ignited by a passion and desire that appear to no longer exist. Two souls that loved so fiercely give the impression of no longer being able to co-exist. Two hearts that once so passionately kissed, now only see a near miss. Turning a beautiful story into a sorrowful twist. You were a small guiding light in a dark and stormy world, but just as us, this concept is no more. We were like a falling star, beautiful, but rushing to its death, with no more hope to bet. We were love incarnated and happiness in a perfect picture. But weak became the pillars of our faultless structure. Our love became sicker, our interactions toxic and somehow we both seemed to lose our compassion and logic. We were brought together by the cosmic and ripped apart by our actions. We were and are a sad love story to be told. We are but the remains of to broken souls.

-M.A. Fernández

Copyright © 2018 Marlin Alicea Fernández, Soul to Ink. All Rights Reserved


3 thoughts on “Broken Souls

  1. This is beautiful prose poetry and very relatable. Many of us have had that first love or first meaningful love, which was awe inspiring and wonderful, only to extinguish. You capture this idea well, and maybe too that we don’t completely recover from this meaningful love. We change, but I would say — it’s okay to be broken and to have to fit everything back together. This love is the worst, but it teaches you your worth, and years or months from now it’s end will show you how much you’ve grown and healed, despite this loss. Have a wonderful week.

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